Hi,
Is it not amazing that we are the hands of Jesus in this world? That He has blessed us with skill and talents, to use in advancing His Kingdom?
I have reviewed the attached document on Refugees and our role as Christians in mitigating their situation. It reflects a good research, requiring edit in sentence structure, grammar and the free flow of the thoughts. It may also require additional content- if this pleases you.
I am ready to work with you to perfect it into an article that is professional, easy to read and well informed.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Neema