Hi - I'd be happy to help you find plot holes and improve pacing, setting and characterization in your memoir. First off, I'm a professional English proofreader with extensive experience in linguistics and writing. I've helped a lot of clients polish and refine their manuscripts (fiction and non-fiction), business documents, books, novels, novellas, ebooks, short stories, blog posts, articles, presentations, etc.
To ensure privacy, I never discuss or distribute the contents of my potential projects but I may keep a copy of your document on file for a period of 48 hours in the event that you need further editing of future revisions.
The finished product will include two copies of the edited text—one that shows the changes (a copy with MS Word Track Changes on), and one that incorporates all of the changes made.
PS. I also hold a BA in English Language and Literature and currently teach IELTS (writing) in Cairo.
PS2. These are some of the books I have edited:
'The Shoebox' by Tracy Ploch (adventure)
'Hiding in the Shade' by Kathryn Wiseman (self-help)
'The Opposite Effect', ‘The Project Principle: How to Create Singularity of Purpose and Scale Your Company Exponentially’ and ‘The Future of Selling’ by Steve Claydon (business development)