Wholesale Sourcing Email Template

I am looking to send an e-mail to wholesale suppliers to get a price list or product catalog. Or open an account on there site. So I need to persuade them through my email so that they will work with me. I also need to stand out from other sellers. I need to get a high open rate. I made a draft below: Hi, I am interested in carrying your products in my ecommerce store(s). I think they will make a great addition to what I am already selling. (Add a few more personable sentences about your knowledge and/or experience with their products. Explain why you are interested in working with them. Talk about you and your business. Share who your audience is.) (In short, tell them your story. Think about how you can set yourself apart from your competition.) What also can be included: -Add a few more personable sentences about your knowledge and/or experience with their products. -Explain why you are interested in working with them -Talk about you and your business -What can we do together to accomplish the goal to sell there product. I need to get a high response rate! At the end of the day you try to sell yourself through the email to get to work with the wholesale supplier. Kind regards, Yassin