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FUN TOUR!

I'm happy to share the video I crafted, filled with fun and lighthearted editing touches. I kept it simple and concise. I'm open to suggestions and I hope you like it, Enjoy!

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  • khadijetouzeine
    khadijetouzeine
    • 10 เดือน ที่ผ่านมา

    Sure! I'm on it! Should I withdraw this version and then upload the new one?

    • 10 เดือน ที่ผ่านมา
  • steverson421
    ผู้จัดการประกวด
    • 10 เดือน ที่ผ่านมา

    Hey! Great work! Liked what you did. The pacing was good. There were a couple of points where our voices felt like they were competing with the music.

    Could you maybe turn the vocals up a little bit?

    Also, could you trim the first portion - I think after I say "not all town homes are created equally" - we cut right to "look at this view"

    also, when in the workout room, can you remove the part of me sitting on that ball and saying something to the camera afterward?

    in the bathroom, let's remove the "sconce light" thing

    Let me know if you can make those revision for me to check out. Thank you for your work!

    • 10 เดือน ที่ผ่านมา