Spruce up screenplay

I have a standard 120-page screenplay written in M.S. Word and in screenplay format. The script is based on my award-winning novel. Much of the dialogue has been taken directly from the novel, but the script needs a little tweaking. It needs to be made to pop if you know what I mean. My last screenplay won awards. I want this one to do the same. If I feel you did not read my overview or you do not have the skills to perform the task to my satisfaction, you will be overlooked. Make certain you have very good screenwriting skills. A few pages of the script are attached. Please make certain you read them and can do what I ask. Thank you.